Redemption

In true struggle for redemption
we seek that which is truly not lost
we seek that which once was
we seek perfection
holding on to our humanity
weak but refusing to stand down
devastated by loss and pain
we choose to fight on
the battle for normalcy and sanity
is to be won from within
They say the bigger u are the harder you fall
in the battle for redemption its not the fall that matters
but the strength to get up and fight

Again and Again till victory is attained.

Kindly drop your Comments below
Inspired By @GambitScarface
Edited By @didaress

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28 comments on “Redemption

  1. I like dis cos its some inspiration 4 someone like me “Redemption”…
    I wud spread d word cos some pple out there r going 2 hard times, & who r we if we can’t help dem…
    God wud ave done d same, he wud ave wnted u 2 do d same.. Xx

  2. “They say the bigger u are the harder you fall
    in the battle for redemption its not the fall that matters
    but the strength to get up and fight” reminds me of 300
    Words from deep within, you have chosen strength…

    Does the drunk man seek redemption?

  3. “They say the bigger u are the harder you fall
    in the battle for redemption its not the fall that matters
    but the strength to get up and fight

    ” #myfavoritepart#. Really inspiring.

  4. Very true words and simply put too. D second paragraph “they say d bigger u are, d harder u fall” really inspires one to move on. It tells dat mistakes and setbacks rn’t neccessarily for no-goods. Like dey say, sometimes it gets worse b4 it gets bettera. Irony’s of life which r true. U just gave sm1 d justification to keep keep. Weldone

  5. Very true words, simply put. The second paragraph “they say d bigger u, d harder u fall….”, catches my attention and it’s inspiring. At least it shows dat mistakes and falls r not synonymous to no-goods and loosers but also pple with great destiny and vision…..but we shouldn’t be swayed it. U’ve just giving sm1 a reason and justification to keep keep. Weldone.

  6. U knw dey say no pain no gain! U’ve gt 2 fight, battle to win. Big man big wahala,d biga u r d harder n more painful ur fall,tru wrd.Ur fight is rising to shine after d fall.
    U r gd my dear,keep up d writing spirit am sure u inspire alot of us.

  7. OMG! am out of words! your Too gud,i give i to u.readin dis,u reminded me of standly tookie williams.REDEMPTION!bt i most say….UR RILI DEEP!DNT EVER STOP WRITTING!

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