We hear but we don’t listen
like an illusion
LOVE ….the word is seeming confusion
mama told me, fall in love wit your friend
Papa said, dont use your heart,love with you head
was told never to make love with a friend…(bad for business)
as long as the earth stays in motion
love is not a forever promise
love turns hate
friends turn snakes
its all the same to me
make a stranger ur lover
fall in love then u find a beast
heart torn to shreads
u r falling so fast
wait a min cloud 9 was barely moments ago
now u fight to hold on to memories that 1ce were
when it all comes down
love hurts & like everything in life
it doesnt last for ever
Thats the way love goes
Kindly drop your Comments below
Edited By BEM
Nice piece. True words.
Dis makes sense!and its honest!me likey!
Nice…hope u weren’t under d influence wen composin dis; bt it sure s a very nice piece…keep it up
friends DONT ALWAYS TURN SNAKES
…you keep this up dude… 🙂 we’ll do our bit to make sure…
Love does hurt,just like everything else that involves another person, another Human!….But! Love ur friend! Its easier to remain friends if u do! Iv loved strangers who av turned friends and we av remained freinds even after d ‘love’ has gone sour…Key thing! Love with an Open mind! Learn also from those you love…and wen love goes sour, Forgive and move on! It may not be easy mostimes BUT it is do-able..
I luv love! I tell pple to feel love! Love with ur heart and keep an open mind….
yanks u rock !!!! u just made my morning !! wrote this @ 1am and it stil didnt feel complete till ur comment came in !!!
Niceeeee! I like! my fav line “love is not a forever promise” I totally agree with that but as yanks said.. when the love has gone sour, friendship is important!…sick sick sick!! i love!!!
nice piece, lesson learnt: Love stings
After a while, hold on to the sweet days
Cos after that all you’ll have left
Is once upon a time.
Hmm,true talk!! D chase is always fun bt d catch can be boring!!always enjoy it while it lasts cos u neva knw wats gonna happen d nxt minute..kip it up bro,I lik dt!!
“..wait a min cloud 9 was barely moments ago
now u fight to hold on to memories that 1ce were
when it all comes down…”
My favorite lines…
No matter how sour love turns, I found that love lasts forever…I let it! Like Yanks said, “Love with ur heart and keep an open mind…” Life is waaaaay easier that way..
Wonder if any of u really knows what love means. When you find out let me know. But in truth, everything in life comes full circle. Remember that!
Strangers r simply friends we’v nt met,so love away though it might last foreva,bt u can always find a way to mk it last for the moment
Beautiful piece
Raw words mkes more sense dan anythng.u say the truth so I gve it 5stars.def wnt to see mre of wat u got
I know what love is but I havn’t fully experienced it and papa was wrong lol, don’t love with ur head cos then it’s not love but a game cos u have to rationalize everything but love flows and defy’s logic. Mama was sure right though, about falling in-love with ur friend, Yanks has said why.
I feel the emotion in this piece and sometimes I think too that love doesn’t last forever, but I’d give anything to feel it even for one sec cos it’s the sweetest feeling ever.
Great piece darling.